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just saying, i don't think this would be considered trance... i like the melodies though!
Mind if i create a trance remix? =D i have ideas.
i'll give credit and link to this this of course =P

Pretty good!

I'd say the only thing about this is that the kick sounds a little distorted, maybe the volume is to high? idk, but other that, this is great! =D

Title suggestion?
"Dark Residence"
maybe?

Great start!

I think that a little more care for this new sound, and you could start a new dubstyle! It sounds like a mix of oldskool, video game and dubstep. It's coming along nicely =D
Just remember to take care of this sound and treat it with respect =P
I'll be waiting for the realease of the first of it's kind!